xXghoststruggXx's Reviews

[Pokemon Bash]

HAHAHAHAHHAHA

The animation was really fluent and I got the humor of it. My small little gripe is that *spoiler alert* the part where the trainer cuts the pokemon, it zooms in on the trainer and it straight up looked like a dude with girly blue hair, and the other zoom in too. *spoiler ended* Otherwise the trainer blatantly obviously looked like a girl at the beginning and menu of the flash.

I really did love it.

Was this suppose to be apart of the pokemon collab that seemed to happen?

~xXghoststruggXx

OnionsXD responds:

She looked like a boy in one scene? Dangit.
That made me realize, I shoulda given her really big boobs. It woulda made her more obviously a girl, and would boost the ratings. XD

And no. I had no idea a pokemon collab was going on. I just made this for lulz in an animation class I'm taking.

Thanks for the review! :D

[Orange Clock is Badass]

bad.

since it's not cock day zero!

[Alan]

I'm surprised this got past blamage.

put some more effort in it, I doubt it's even your final in animation class. I would suggest trying to improve on drawing, try to use your line tool, It's a lot less of a hassle then constantly redrawing with the paint brush ( I have been there.) plus it keeps your work nice and neat. I did like the fact that you added a voice, but if you have trouble with voice acting, you could always try a voice acter on the website ( as long as your serious about it and dedicated to it.)

I did get the joke, but the way you presented it turned the joke off, try to have kids running around, poking your character, trying to communicate to you, a fat kid asking food from you, ect. Leading up to the point where you jump out of the slide and cause your character serious injuries. Don't be afraid to be "off the wall." It's Newgrounds its a lot more leanit then youtube try to take advantage of it, you might wanna take a look on help/FAQ to see your limits.

hope this helped :).

MichaelObeton responds:

Thanks, xXbrostbuggXx, that did help.
Where can I get kids, though?

[Zombies In Your Backyard]

Reviews In Your Backyard

Nothing really special......

Likes: flixel, controls, music, and was smooth most of the game.

Dislikes: too easy, repetition, no real upgrade system, weaponry could use some adjustments (especially the Minigun, it is still overpowered), hate staying in one area for the entire game with no change in environment, I've already seen this kind of thing before, and didn't feel rewarding.

There was nothing that really made me go "Wow!" in this flash game. If you make a sequel I would suggest the following:
~ A change in area.
~ A weapon upgrading system
~ Have more zombie diversity (Give certain zombies special abilities)
~ Add more selection to the store
~ Add special things that'll pop in and out inside the area(s)
~ A online co-op feature
~ A hardcore mode
~ Make it more challenging
~ Make it more rewarding for completing the game

In my opinion this was nothing really "Front page" worthy....... Again, I wouldn't mind playing a sequel to this.

Goodbye and happy trails. :)

~xXGhoststruggXx

[[SS]- Cheese is born]

could've been funny

If it wasn't dragged for so long you could've threw in a troll face, a cock, a WTF bomb,a white screen with some text, or all of them combined. The art was ok, but why's the top of the gun grey and the bottom of it black. Did I laugh? No, I sat here bored out of my mind. Am I surprised that this is on shit of the week? Yes! How did this get past blam? people who think this is funny for some odd reason. Not to mention it's not even a game, It's dead obvious it's an animation, not a game.

All in all it deserves to be blammed random people shouldn't give out random 5's on the pico meter and 10's on the reviews so that way they can get there save points. Good thing we have this "turd of the week" setup so that way we can atleast have a 2nd chance to blam it or give a very low score.

Just work harder, and hopefully you can produce a good animation or game next time.

[Japan Dogs Connect]

no one wants to play a wordsearch on NG.

nothing to snag me into, constantly looping music that gets annoying, an easy to cheat game, and not too mention very boring.

There are a lot of ways to make it better, like for example a time limit, neon lights, explosions, music like techno, although it doesn't relate to jap. dogs that would be things I would throw in there to make it less dull.