The animation was really fluent and I got the humor of it. My small little gripe is that *spoiler alert* the part where the trainer cuts the pokemon, it zooms in on the trainer and it straight up looked like a dude with girly blue hair, and the other zoom in too. *spoiler ended* Otherwise the trainer blatantly obviously looked like a girl at the beginning and menu of the flash.
I really did love it.
Was this suppose to be apart of the pokemon collab that seemed to happen?
She looked like a boy in one scene? Dangit.
That made me realize, I shoulda given her really big boobs. It woulda made her more obviously a girl, and would boost the ratings. XD
And no. I had no idea a pokemon collab was going on. I just made this for lulz in an animation class I'm taking.
Thanks for the review! :D
since it's not cock day zero!
I'm surprised this got past blamage.
put some more effort in it, I doubt it's even your final in animation class. I would suggest trying to improve on drawing, try to use your line tool, It's a lot less of a hassle then constantly redrawing with the paint brush ( I have been there.) plus it keeps your work nice and neat. I did like the fact that you added a voice, but if you have trouble with voice acting, you could always try a voice acter on the website ( as long as your serious about it and dedicated to it.)
I did get the joke, but the way you presented it turned the joke off, try to have kids running around, poking your character, trying to communicate to you, a fat kid asking food from you, ect. Leading up to the point where you jump out of the slide and cause your character serious injuries. Don't be afraid to be "off the wall." It's Newgrounds its a lot more leanit then youtube try to take advantage of it, you might wanna take a look on help/FAQ to see your limits.
hope this helped :).
Thanks, xXbrostbuggXx, that did help.
Where can I get kids, though?
duh fuck did i just watch?
no seriously.....Duh fuck did just watched?
mannnn that was funny
Don't bake weed muffins when your mom forgets to lock the oven.
The weird thing is that they delete helpful reviews. It almost feels like M-bot is stocking me....
this deserves a perfect 10/10.
extreamly good 3d animation
I found a broken medal which is cameo 1 (SM 1) I'm not gonna tell you guys how to get it. but it won't let me get it, I clicked the spot multiple times and replayed it twice to try to get it I felt like letting you guys know that.
Best 3d animation I've seen on newgrounds so far and I hope to see more of these kind of things in the future, but this must have been bloody to create.
have a good day.
kinda funny, but it could use improvement.
I did laugh at the part where it sounded like a montage when the kid was on the computer. You could get a tad bit better at art. You should change the beginning, when I saw the beginning I instantly thought it was gonna be a loop about a kid butt humping the couch. The ending could've been better to, I didn't even laugh at the ending.
Here's what you need to improve:
*montage moment ( should've dragged it with different camera angles and don't make it look like he's masterbating with an invisible penis.)
I'm guessing you were inspired by Happy Partridge.
Hope to see some improvement.
I was actually ready to see a fight, but when the replay button appeared I was like this >:(. Name the title differently, sorta misleading. Although the art work was good looking, you shouldn't really post up tests on Newgrounds, It should be your judgement weather it sounds and/or looks good or not, then when you think the full version is ready post it and let the community give criticism.
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